ohh, that's my cup of tea in business

- the breathing samples are nice, but maybe you better not repeat them --> or variate with samples that create a feeling together

- same goes a maybe bit for the loww bass.... or add something to it, like a few more chords in the same key

- if you variate a bit more with the melody starting at 2.51 and you let it evolve through the entire tune you get a very nice tune

- a better breakdown would make it even better

soundquality is great btw