Hi there,

I made a trance-track that is almost finished I'm curious what you are thinking about this one. Do you think that this track is good enough to sign it at a Label? Do you have some tips for me?

Greetz, Bennasco

I cutted a part of the begin of the track and the end. This is the "www" edit.

Links:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/gl0pz2
http://rapidshare.com/files/127246873/Bennasco_-_Forbidden_Thoughts_Master__www_.mp3.html
http://www.speedyshare.com/918674614.html

nice one


sounds a bit rough to me


i think it would be nice to improve the bassline...
lead sounds ok but gets a little boring after a while
some FX'es and better EQ would lift your track up to a higher level

great one after a long time :

Yep, nice one.

But as Thijs said, sounds kinda rough.

The bassline in the first part of the tune doesn't sound very good to me. At the end of the sample it's much better. Dunno why is it, it sounds like it's an octave higher or something. Or maybe different filters? Anyway the one at the end is nice.

Not a fan of the kick, personally. It has way toooo much low frequencies (those under 100 Hz).

Leads are very nice, just play with the EQ and filters more to make it sound cleaner. It needs more middle and higher frequencies (I'd said from about 1kHz higher). Try to make some progression in the melody part to make it more interesting.

On the whole, nice track, mate. Just need some more tunings.

i agree
i miss the peak, the break-out
on the whole well done