Welcome to the forums here

My way of reviewing is a physical way... commenting most of the details
Listening close encounters:
- I don't like the kick

(do you use fruityloops ?

)
- nicea bassline, not really special though
- nice synth sound in the start
- new things come quite exploding, not really built up
- nice breakdown, same goes for the choirs in bthe background

- after the breakdown it's quiet.... there's no atmosphere for the synth..... not something i like
- buildup is not my fav. and taking too long imo...... i want to hear a nice body
- a 2nd breakdown ?
- it's getting too repetive for me now
- it's not that dj friendly

Overall - i know it looks like a lot of negative things - the sound quality is very good

The tune has nice sides... good synths, melodies and breaks but needs to get structured better and could use better drums

sorry, but i need a rant on this service too...
i need the option to skip through tracks, relisten things on detail level etc.
and beside of that, i don't like the way unsigned tracks are only available for sale, as i see your songs are only on itunes

(i'm a producer too btw)