Very nice
sample here (canīt really call it a tune yet because itīs reaaaly short)
the melody sounds very awesome! break is really nice, nice synths.... but I agree with peggie here; forget the shaker
about the kick inside the break; perhaps you could let that one start at a little bit lower volume, somewhat deeper, and then build up with it.
The crashes right before the end of the break sound a little bit too standard, perhaps you could do something different (more original) to end the break with.
but still gotta say I love your melody mate, this could be a great track
perhaps you could upload a longer sample so then we could hear something of the buildup
but reallly liking this tune

hope you can do something with my review
good luck in the competition