ok guys

this is our submission for the cd contest...

as you ll notice , the bollocks of the track are missing...still..please tell me what you think of this track..

the first time i heard the rendered version of this track, i felt tears in my eyes..maybe im a bit cranky..but still..

any criticism /suggestions/view will be gratefully acknowledged

the link
http://s52.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3H9UGJF...5G385NC7MU93X4U

Z3TA+

tune sounds good, but work on the filter from the ARP, sometimes it gets too shocking in and gets out again.
The bass does not sounds nice without kicks so make asap some percussions

dunno what you mean with bollocks, but i guess you mean the drums ?

I hope you are not going to make it a total remix from sweet misery because it's a contest for original own tunes

nice start mate,, decent bassline,, and good arp!.. but indeed what thijsje said:



,,, maybe move to the unsigned productions?

honestly, i dont know which song you re talking about...please give me the artist name and song titel so that i can give it a listen and then remove my track if it sounds like i ve lifted the tune...

Me either.

This clip sounds nice and warm , with its appropiate crispiness, looking forward to hear it in the CD.

i listened it again but it seems to be ok like this



it was the bassline which is very very similar to tiesto - a tear in the open... but imo it's ok like it is now

http://mp3.juno.co.uk/MP3/SF140630-01-01-08.mp3

like it would like to hear all tune!!! i guess it shoudl be around 10min long

Yep, very nice.

It needs a good kick. Looking forward for the full version.