Hey,
what a weekend, finished my first own work in only 10 hours. i had a flash of creativity and made it without any breaks
its a very easy tune, nothing special, buts its the first track i finished after my 4 months producing experience

well here it is, i would be happy about some feedback




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Nice picture there, I bet the track has the same quality.

as I already told you on msn, you need to work out a lot in the percussion... synths are just lovely. They remember me to jonas steur, especially the bassline (yes, you already told how you made that )

maybe it's nice to use another melody in the break because there are not many melodies.. maybe you could even make a few more for the climax ?

a few stereo effect and smooth stereo changing synths could create more depth in it... but i think that's a little bit much for a beginning producer like you

Nice, sounds very cool in my opinion, compared to the experience you have. Those synths indeed sound really great.

Another thing that I've noticed, what thijsje said too that about the melodies... maybe adding some more would sounds better and less boring. And I don't really like those claps, but that's just me I guess.

Anyway, great work so far, that's for sure.

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hihat at 0.16 is still not nice
break could use some more depth (hint: use smooth effects)
some places can use a "crash"
claps are nice now