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Lagrom
Hey,
what a weekend, finished my first own work in only 10 hours. i had a flash of creativity and made it without any breaks biggrin.gif
its a very easy tune, nothing special, buts its the first track i finished after my 4 months producing experience

well here it is, i would be happy about some feedback biggrin.gif

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BoTi
Nice picture there, I bet the track has the same quality. tongue.gif
thijsje
as I already told you on msn, you need to work out a lot in the percussion... synths are just lovely. They remember me to jonas steur, especially the bassline (yes, you already told how you made that wink.gif )

maybe it's nice to use another melody in the break because there are not many melodies.. maybe you could even make a few more for the climax ?

a few stereo effect and smooth stereo changing synths could create more depth in it... but i think that's a little bit much for a beginning producer like you wink.gif
BoTi
Nice, sounds very cool in my opinion, compared to the experience you have. biggrin.gif Those synths indeed sound really great.

Another thing that I've noticed, what thijsje said too that about the melodies... maybe adding some more would sounds better and less boring. And I don't really like those claps, but that's just me I guess. tongue.gif

Anyway, great work so far, that's for sure. smile.gif
Lagrom
new link wink.gif
thijsje
hihat at 0.16 is still not nice sad.gif
break could use some more depth (hint: use smooth effects)
some places can use a "crash"
claps are nice now smile.gif
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