Well I have decided to leave this remix of what I was going to leave as final entry.

Since is a remix of my own work, then it qualifies.

http://www.dance-industries.com/view_artis...2361&track=9658

Cheers

eventhough I'm not into all the techy stuff about what it takes to make a song great, I still think this one is quite nice - for what it's worth

Thank you Benjamin, certainly I appreciate checking it out tho, it is not your cup of tea.

Cheers mate.

I'll take the time today to make a great review (after listening some crappy unsigned tunes on other forums)

this tune really proves a tough battle in the final polls

- nice begin, those bells and strings
- 1.00 already some shivers and wet eyes
- that effect under the shakers remembers me to something... i'll send a sample of that soon
- hmm, the change at 2.15 is not what i expected of the tune it's gonna be rough now
- we're going heavy now.,.. nice effects again
- hihats at 3.10 are bulls**t
- i personally should place a "crash" at 3.47 in the beginning of the flute
- 4.18 is catching me again promises something to
- nice breakdown
- 4.16 clap is too dry
- 5.30 (remembers me to a great tune from (a few ??) years ago,, but the name escaped me)
- 6.15 not enough words to describe it, so:
- the drumfill at 6.30 is a little too long and the effect after it comes too quick and is too loud
- omg, you used greeeeaaaat chords
- the kick at 7.58 is horrible
- 8.15 some breakbeats now
- have a few doubts about those hihats
- the synthFX at 8.50 is too loud again
- nice outro but i have doubts about the "fruity" (?) kick

overall a great tune but you need to edit some things i think... at least some things in the percussion

i need to talk you about this on msn

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Hehe didn't mean it like that, I meant for what my comment was worth on the account that I don't know anything about making a track

The song is great no doubt

really nice track, i just feel that sometimes it kinda disconnects from itself when u do some changes like in the 2:15 change like thijsje said, maybe if u could make it more coherent, smoothen those transitions it would be great,
and yeah some of the sounds are kinda weak, like the hihats, agree on that, a little bit more polishing and it would be superb,
still i really liked it

sounds kinda good