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Dj Tomax
When our (Peekay & Tomax) track is finished, it will be the entry for the comp.

Style: Techtrance

Here's just a litle sample. Nothing official yet. A lot of things have to be changed. That rough pad sucks big time at the moment laugh.gif

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http://www.xs4all.nl/~hwkramer/djtomax/Poisoned_Stuff_-_We_Are.mp3


Tell me what you think biggrin.gif
Bricky
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The sample is waaaaaaaaaay too short to comment on man wink.gif
It's very good, but I'll have to wait till I hear more of it!

btw: That flat kick ... it's an excellent sound! Can I have it? Pretty please? wub.gif
PDM
http://www.xs4all.nl/~hwkramer/djtomax/Poi...ff_-_We_Are.mp3

I'm downloading, reply later.


EDIT:
Phantazm
sounds good, i see people go mad on such a track, wink.gif
track sounds a bit dark.. me like smile.gif, very *anthemy imo a little rank 1 stylish wich is ment positive cool.gif
personally i think the melody is a bit easy but sometimes that works very well with techtrance.
the sample is a bit short so i haven't got much more to say but good luck
Dj Tomax
I'll post a longer sample later, we're still working on it. biggrin.gif

But thanks for the replies anyway rolleyes.gif
Dj Tomax
Link is updated.

4:11 minute long version
128 kbps
thijsje
QUOTE(Dj Tomax @ May 10 2005, 04:09 PM)
Link is updated.

4:11 minute long version
128 kbps

yay, this was the one I was waiting for biggrin.gif

I heard a few little things that you could edit:

1. The distortion/flanger/phase like effect you use in the buildup after the breakdown, it sounds iritating to me... try to use the variating things in a later stadium

2. The heaviest part of the sample sounds a little too limited, it sounds like ou have set a maximum of 0 DB (or something) but the music is going over it and it is limited now wink.gif
try to work that out smile.gif

3. The EQ'ing could be some better. I know it's not the final version yet but try to remove the ultra high frequencies wink.gif

the rest is just great wub.gif
but I gues you already knew that wink.gif
PegaSus
W00w some Fred Baker feeling here tongue.gif

great buildup,, but indeed the flanger should be gone ..
the clap is perfect!! the Speedy J 909 snare at the 1/4 is fine too. thumbsupsmileyanim.gif

the low bass should be a lot lower ,,,make it Marco V - Automanual like..
Hmm not sure about the melody.,. is that part of the buildup or is it the "theme" already? unsure.gif ....

great track so far... please work this complete out!!!
Dj Tomax
LINK UPDATED!!!

Full version!

128kbps
Time: 6:53

Thnx for the tips. I've worked some things out and added some new s**t, hope you'll like it. biggrin.gif

http://www.xs4all.nl/~hwkramer/djtomax/Poi...ff_-_We_Are.mp3
Dj Tomax
QUOTE(Dj Tomax @ May 10 2005, 08:44 PM)
LINK UPDATED!!!

Full version!

128kbps
Time: 6:53

Thnx for the tips. I've worked some things out and added some new s**t, hope you'll like it. biggrin.gif

http://www.xs4all.nl/~hwkramer/djtomax/Poi...ff_-_We_Are.mp3

Forgot to say that it isn't mastered yet! biggrin.gif
thijsje
QUOTE(Dj Tomax @ May 11 2005, 06:44 PM)
QUOTE(Dj Tomax @ May 10 2005, 08:44 PM)
LINK UPDATED!!!

Full version!

128kbps
Time: 6:53

Thnx for the tips. I've worked some things out and added some new s**t, hope you'll like it.  biggrin.gif

http://www.xs4all.nl/~hwkramer/djtomax/Poi...ff_-_We_Are.mp3

Forgot to say that it isn't mastered yet! biggrin.gif

wow, yeaa wub.gif

I like how it is now, except on the master issues
nice breakbeats you are using for the variations smile.gif

I hope you consider the effect at 3.00 on the ARP as a master thing (I don't like the effect)

waiting for the mastered version dribble4.gif
Dj Tomax
QUOTE(thijsje @ May 11 2005, 05:50 PM)
QUOTE(Dj Tomax @ May 11 2005, 06:44 PM)
QUOTE(Dj Tomax @ May 10 2005, 08:44 PM)
LINK UPDATED!!!

Full version!

128kbps
Time: 6:53

Thnx for the tips. I've worked some things out and added some new s**t, hope you'll like it.  biggrin.gif

http://www.xs4all.nl/~hwkramer/djtomax/Poi...ff_-_We_Are.mp3

Forgot to say that it isn't mastered yet! biggrin.gif

wow, yeaa wub.gif

I like how it is now, except on the master issues
nice breakbeats you are using for the variations smile.gif

I hope you consider the effect at 3.00 on the ARP as a master thing (I don't like the effect)

waiting for the mastered version dribble4.gif

Hehehe ok.

I don't like that effect at 3:00 either, I was still thinking about that one, to let it in or not. But I'm going to remove it biggrin.gif
Dj Tomax
This is it. The track is finished. Well, that's what I think laugh.gif

Poisoned Stuff - We Are (Tomax Techtrance Mix)

New link:
http://www.xs4all.nl/~hwkramer/djtomax/Poi...htrance_Mix.mp3

Quality: 192 kbps
Time: 6:54

Tell what you think of the final version biggrin.gif
PDM
Sounds Great in both tech and musical part.

It had e dancing in my chair while I was surfing, I could also picture this track been played in a club with a couple of margaritas or martinis in my head, it should sound great!!

The only con I see, is that this is not really what I'd call Anthemic...

Great job!

smile.gif
Dj Tomax
QUOTE(PDM @ May 15 2005, 05:12 PM)
Sounds Great in both tech and musical part.

It had e dancing in my chair while I was surfing, I could also picture this track been played in a club with a couple of margaritas or martinis in my head, it should sound great!!

The only con I see, is that this is not really what I'd call Anthemic...

Great job!

smile.gif

Describe anthemic...... biggrin.gif
PDM
Have you heard of Sensation Anthems, Euphoric , uplifting , great and beautiful combinations of arps and rich texturized pads, with a simple but solid lead?

That is what you look after an Anthem, a song with any or all the elemts listed above.

Don't get me wrong, your track is great, and I might be wrong, with that sounding, this song just made you a solid competition, but the weakness of the track is not having that Anthem feel.

smile.gif
Dj Tomax
QUOTE(PDM @ May 15 2005, 07:47 PM)
Have you heard of Sensation Anthems, Euphoric , uplifting , great and beautiful combinations of arps and rich texturized pads, with a simple but solid lead?

That is what you look after an Anthem, a song with any or all the elemts listed above.

Don't get me wrong, your track is great, and I might be wrong, with that sounding, this song just made you a solid competition, but the weakness of the track is not having that Anthem feel.

smile.gif

How you say it is that only a pure trance track can be the anthem for 2005
PDM
QUOTE(Dj Tomax @ May 15 2005, 08:06 PM)
QUOTE(PDM @ May 15 2005, 07:47 PM)
Have you heard of Sensation Anthems, Euphoric , uplifting , great and beautiful combinations of arps and rich texturized pads, with a simple but solid lead?

That is what you look after an Anthem, a song with any or all the elemts listed above.

Don't get me wrong, your track is great, and I might be wrong, with that sounding, this song just made you a solid competition, but the weakness of the track is not having that Anthem feel.

smile.gif

How you say it is that only a pure trance track can be the anthem for 2005

Look mate, I apologize if I'm offending you with my critic, so I'll just let it go.

Good Luck with the track. You are a good competition.
thijsje
QUOTE(PDM @ May 16 2005, 01:05 AM)
You are a good competition.

as everybody seems to be this time blink.gif
Dj Tomax
Updated the link. Changed some master things. This is the final version. Also available in 320kbps, ask me if you want it biggrin.gif
thijsje
sounds nice m8 smile.gif
better than the previous time smile.gif

maybe some points are still a little too dark (by example the point at 0.30) so maybe it's possible to EQ down the very low frequencies of the bass ?

oh, and the sweep at 4.19, dunno it depends on the bitrate,,, but it sounds like it has a little too low bitrate wink.gif


interesting tune smile.gif
maybe interesting enough for remixing unsure.gif
first awaiting the results smile.gif
Dj Tomax
QUOTE(thijsje @ May 17 2005, 11:19 AM)
sounds nice m8 smile.gif
better than the previous time smile.gif

maybe some points are still a little too dark (by example the point at 0.30) so maybe it's possible to EQ down the very low frequencies of the bass ?

oh, and the sweep at 4.19, dunno it depends on the bitrate,,, but it sounds like it has a little too low bitrate wink.gif


interesting tune smile.gif
maybe interesting enough for remixing unsure.gif
first awaiting the results smile.gif

Thnx for the comments. Will check it out oncemore biggrin.gif
TimHollander
Man this sounds NICEEEEE!!! dribble4.gif
great dark tech-trancer! could fit perfectly in some hard trance sets!
havnīt really got comments... itīs just awesome thumbsupsmileyanim.gif
Dj Tomax
QUOTE(Tiest-o-holic @ May 19 2005, 09:36 AM)
Man this sounds NICEEEEE!!! dribble4.gif
great dark tech-trancer! could fit perfectly in some hard trance sets!
havnīt really got comments... itīs just awesome thumbsupsmileyanim.gif

Thnx rolleyes.gif
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