my entry for the anthem competition - Cherry flavoured lips
(don't really know about the title though, ill just leave it for now)

the song is uploaded @ dance-industries,
there are multiple songs please make sure you reply the good one (just make sure you reply ).

information about me and the song are located at dance-industries,

listen here

I was absolutely loving this one up to 5mins or so. Everything is perfectly structured, the break is very brave and clean ...

but at 5mins, I'm not sure what happened. There's something very inharmonic going on. It feels like it's the baseline, but I don't think it is. This would be a class tune if you could fix it (it runs right through to the end).

Love the name btw, it fits perfectly with the music

Another nice one from you mate!!! Think the bassline is a little bit too loud.. Melody is good again!.. but hoped for a fat lead in this track..!! .Buildup and percussion is nice.. think your other track would be a better Anthem Tune if i may be honest..

great tune!!

as first: I don't like the clap, it sounds so empty... maybe it's only too loud

the effects you used in the break of 4.20 are very iritating, try to make something different. I agree in bricky, the bass at 5.00 is absolutely wrong (the break itself is cool ).... I hear another sublead there which makes it even more horrible. Try to fix it... if you can't get out it, send me the MIDI, i will fix it for ya. The 1st effect after 5.00 is again soms horror'ish, try to rework them all too.

For the rest: great tune but try to rework all the soundeffects, the kick (which i forgot to mention, but it's too fat) and ofcourse that bass. If you can't work that one out, send me the MIDI in a PM with all the melodies arround it at that time. I think it's just you want to do too much with the bass

Good job
keep 'em coming

Downloading, I'll leave feedback tomorrow.

EDIT:

* Solid Intro
* the melody starting at 4:01 , needs more emotion more energy, I can't explain, sure you give it energy when the rest of the elements show up, but the melody itself, the synth itself needs its energy, I could say your track is really dreamy, if that is what you intended, then great job.

sounds like something armin would spin and thats not a bad thing huh. good entry