my entry for the anthem competition - Blank Diary

the song is uploaded @ dance-industries,
there are multiple songs please make sure you reply the good one (just make sure you reply ).

information about me and the song are located at dance-industries,

listen here

Firstly, this is a superb track, and any criticism I can come up with will only be small, so feel free to ignore it

Actually, the only thing I would change is your chord sequence: it runs close to a few natural progressions (C#m,B,A,G#, or maybe C#m,E,A,G# or something similar), but it's not near enough to any of them to be 'comfortable' if you know what I mean.

Come to think of it, it's highly unlikely that this would bother anyone else except me, so you can almost certainly ignore it

In every other regard, I can't find fault

This level of professionalism is the reason that I was unsure of my own track


I'm off to listen to your other track now ...

well if someone else notice it, i might change things. but it's good to say what bothers you in a track.

also i think your track is very good itself.
just work it out a little anthem-like and you'll make a good change imo.

I checked the chords, after a musical course teached by 2 professional teachers who have reached several degrees I should know the comment of bricky.

Ichecked it and can't find any things that should be changed so I think it's ok.
I can't judge it on the synths etc. coz my headphone is not that good anymore (dad works home so i can't use my own monitors ) Maybe it's something to use some synths like the arturia minimoog, arturia ARP 2600 or albino and make some extra cool effects with it...I hear a few cool sweeps but if you make a few more and use them on a smooth way, then it makes the tune a little deeper .

for the rest: good job

good track man!!.. really nice..
Some classic work in it.. only thing you should work on is a fat melody.. i mean a fat synth playing a part of your (good) melody!!..This is very hard to beat i think...really enjoyed this one.. good bassline and instruments chose!

work this out and you don't have to worry anymore

you mean the synth that starts @ 1.50?

was gonna edit this a bit more, but for now im working on another project.
thanks for the reply's .

really nice track Phantazm !!

Great track!!!!!!
its been a long time ive heard a such pleasent trance track, from anyone (and i mean the pros;) armin and all the other guy.
Phantasm my man great work, Great world of music, it has a very nice & pleasent personality.
this is one great beauty.
your my top man

(9.8/10)

whoehoe my topic is alive again , thanks guys, i appreciate the reply's very much

I miss a real big climax in this track, but for the rest it's very good

If you work on it a little bit longer, and fix some things up. I think this track is definately release worth

Sinsure, this track of yours is phenomenal, the only thing I notice are some extra high frequencies taht in my opinion should be gated, gating just the high frequencies will polish the track more and will sound superb superb.