Hello all

here is my new track i think this one is ma best till now

DJ KaRiMNeT - System K (Original Mix)

Sorry for da low quality .. !

Waiting for ur comments

d/l


edit:
yep, it's indeed a low quality....
too low for comments about basses, hi-hats and real mastering.

It's not someone I hear everyday but it's nice
nice melody and instruments.
maybe you can start the organ in the break from 4.25 a bit later ?

keep up the good work

edit 2: nice outro

hehe yeah low quality
Maybe you should change that house bassline sometimes mate..
a little bit outdated now sorry that i say that....
Build up isn't bad.. cause it's perfect , not too long not too short..! Maybe could use some more percussion mate.. The break has some nice pads,, and a nice synth man! Sound fresh summerish man..nice done.. at 4.20 there is another break,,a pretty good drumloop comes in..nice man!.. but after that break you made it a little bit too busy,, too much on the same time ,, better drop some instruments there... This is certainly your best work.. really like this melody.. fresh!..
Please upload some better quality mp3 the next time
Good work on this mate~!

6.7/10 !

thijsje .. Thanx for listenin' dude and i'll upload a highquality version soon

PegaSus .. Thanx for listenin' about da bassline i wanted to make it dancy so i've found that this is d abest choice !

wow it's gr8 really good job karim &indeed it's ur best song til now i love the melody but i think this tack needs some lil' adjustments though

Thanx and it isn't 100% Final yet //

http://www.uktrancealliance.com/forum/inde...showtopic=12012

here is a higher quality one

Hi... I have listened to your track it sounds good, sound quality is good. I have downloaded the hq version btw.... but I dont like the square sound + house bassline because it doesnt fit well... this is good idea I think, but this sounds like first try of a song.. so keep making on it. mate...

buro is back

very interesting piece of music.... i like the pads... very moody... and the lead is sick .. sounds like old school armin or ferry ...... i like the melody.. but over all the track needs more work... build up the kicks for your buildups and breakdowns... insted of having the same pattern for the build up use a diferent one.. also... i dont know how powerful your set up is... mabey think of inserting another ARP or another Counter melody... wich is basicaly on the same scale... only mirrored from the original melody... also the percusion gets a little boaring... to spice it up... change the percusion patteren form 16 to 64 and the last bars double up on everything,, add a little break beat with the pad... and you got your self a tight production... keep working on it.. if you need help or advice dont be afraid to ask... lattterz

p.s. i dont know if this is what you want.. but to make the KICK hit harder.. instert a compressor this will help the KICK BASS stand out from the rest of the song.. it makes people move more... since after all this is dance music. if you need to know what settings to use on ur compressor let me know ill help you.

Hello man,

nice little track here... i agree with wahat buro said,, about the square wavey riff that starts the track off in the 1st breakdown, it does sound a tiny bit random, but then again so do alot of riffs in my tracks, personally, i don't use any outboard equiptment although i do have a JP800 just sitting here, i work mainly with audio, and find that if you compress and EQ things well enough you'd be fine working with Audio or VSTi, unless you want unbelievably Powerful leadlines, you can get away with it, i could be wrong though.... anyway back to the riff: maybe remedy it by restructuring it and giving the riff a better delay sequence...see iff you can get it to bounce maybee something that bounces 1/2d and 1/4 or something, just an idea to experiment with.. make it open up a bit and sound a bit nicer.... you could also try detuning the 2nd occillator down 20 cents? or use a bit of pulsewidth field in the occillators that would prolly open it up a bit and give more of an impression of space?.... again as the guys pointed out, the bass is sticking out a bit, although i am a sucker for housebasslines, (i love em)) maybee try to get the bassline working in the same key as thew nice little string sequence you have running along... that would probably get it working nicer with the rest of it... keeping all the frequency tones in uniform a littlebetter.... please do not let this retract from the track, it was sounding really enjjoyable to me....! good work man! like it!

johnny

buro .. Thanx for listening and i'm working on Original & Clube Mixes ..
The original mix is different 4rom this one but the club mix is re-producing this one

DjHuge .. Thanx for listening dude .. my bad is mastering ! so i'll send u a PM btw i've got waves diamond bundle 5 i'll try to use it and wait for the Final Original & Club Mixes .

johnnynrg .. Thanx for listening and now i'm working on the original & Club Mixes i think u will like both .. original melodic and calm choirs ... etc the club mix with a Housey Bassline so u will love it