Started from the begin (again) with my tune.
I'm sure it will finish !
Some ppl might have heard the previous sample.
This is only a way shorter preview from the buildup till the break.
I re-edited almost all drums from it and beginning that synthy I had as main melody a few bars before the break.

http://s3.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2LY6Q6LYR5RX439AC56GALGVJC

The strings you hear in and before the break are going to be changed. I will make a new instrument for it and edit the chords too.
Besides that is the main melody going to be a sub-melody. I;m going to create some breathing + sharp synthesizers.

BTW, don't blame me about the hi-hats (especially the very begin)... also that is not finished yet.

I hope for much replies

Thanks,
Thijs (aka One Man On The Moon)

Hey Thijs,
great track, and love the melody, very spacy! :-)

Should be a good tune when u finish, no doubt, but i like what u have so far.

The bassline is missing something, though, needs to be fuller, i would make the bass a little fatter, and use a little bit more percussion...

but overall, its nice

keep up the great work thijs,

thanks m8
I'll send you the zip file when it's finished

I love this track also, one of your best works till now, i got the track for more then a week now (from your shoutbox hehe). I can hardly wait for the final version, congratulations!!!