listen to your track and:
Your first production right?? that's pretty good then,, better then what i've did.
nice simple bassline it starts with,, followed by a funky beat ,, maybe you could compress the synth lead in the break more.. make it more technoish
I kinda like those leads you know.. and try to put a bassline under it,,, cut the synth bleep at 4:11... not adding quality to it..

,,,and that bleep at the end could be gone too....sorry., Hope you re-editing this again. try to work it out mate!!
nice track... 6.8/10