Hi guys

Ive made this song with Reason and put in the vocals with Adobe Audition
The vocals aren't optimal at this moment so don't listen to that already (it will change, don't worry)
Maybe the bass could be more soften in my opinion but im working on that.


I hope U will like the song already and please say U think i must change on this song. Ill hope its worth

Here is a demo

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Splitkin - Nothing to hide.mp3


and another one...please say what U think of it...its an after hours mix so i hope its worth to listen to

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Splitkin - Behind Sunset.mp3(after hours mix)

Nice try Franky

you sing pretty good
the timing needs some work, but for a reason project you`ve done pretty good

The strings you used could be removed or edited much much more
The vocals are on the background when they are introduced
Vocals are something different
Not really my style but some work is needed

Hehe timing is important mate,,
Use Acid Pro 4.0 or 2.0 to Time Stretch the vocals to the right BPM...
I prefer your gonna use Cubase hehe,,Hmm and i don't really like the Yamaha el cheapo sounding synth stag your using for the melody.. well change the instrument or remove the vocal... it doesn't really fit with eachother... I don'want to let you think this track suck,!! it really doesn't man.. i like the idea of this track a lot,, but please make the timing ok and fix that synth sound... then post this again...

i will download the other track right now...

Behind the Sun has some nice trance elements,,, but the intro is too long, and the beat ,, well does it more to some pop house track, sorry. It sounds a bit repetive,, doesn't turn me on, sorry to say mate! Maybe you can drop that melody and try to think of something new,, some other synth line? another bassline? , a break with some cool effects? ?? .. could all be good...

Hope you will upload the new versions soon...
keep it up!

Thnx guys...i know the vocals just suck but its now the give on where i will put the vocals in my final version

There will come a lot of changes on this song...and yes the sound is very cheap.


And Behind Sunset. I forgot to say its one of my early fruityloop edits


I'm going to work on for perfection...thnx PegaSus for your critical opinions and advices and turned me in the right way to perfection my songs and skills. I will keep U all up to date with my further progresses.